I bow full of tears
and tell
the loneliness
on street
it was love
But nobody saw
and the crowd
engulfed me
into the oblivion
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How often love gets swamped in other things.
Sad but touching.
“tell/ the loneliness/ on the street/ it was love”
–a beautiful phrase!
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you painted the sadness perfectly.
I agree with mairmusic, that line was simply perfection. Great poem!
Awesomely simple. Hello from Jingle’s Poet Rally.
-bryan