Continuous years

18 May

Time is running out
Imperfect white socks stands alone
Slowly I pick up the morning and glasses
Black and ten years old
For a moment it escapes me
Under sweater and mood
I look confused
And mirrored my hair
As a proces of continuous years

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10 Responses to “Continuous years”

  1. wordwand May 19, 2010 at 10:56 am #

    well written , times flies and we are getting old without noticing that.

  2. Ediomo Udofia May 19, 2010 at 12:42 pm #

    This is awesomely done……You really spat them out with great sense!!!

    Well done.

    I’ve added you to my blogroll, feel very free to add mine!!!

    You’ll love this: http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/05/special-bday-note.html

  3. Tim Keeton May 19, 2010 at 1:49 pm #

    Imperfect white socks stands alone

    I like this.

    Tim Keeton
    (Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
    http://timkeeton.worpdress.com
    http://undeadpoets.wordpress.com

  4. luna12780 May 19, 2010 at 3:44 pm #

    A very intriguing poem. It sounds happy, yet full of contemplation as well. I like your style. Compliments.

  5. megzone May 19, 2010 at 5:04 pm #

    wwooww..thats a lovely one.. nostalgic memories..

    im here from Jingle’s rally..
    you can check my poem at
    http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/05/19/thursday-poets-rally-an-evening-of-life/

  6. suzicate May 19, 2010 at 7:37 pm #

    Kind of sneaks up on us doesn’t it? Love how you said you pick up the morning and your glasses.

  7. heartspell May 19, 2010 at 7:54 pm #

    We can feel young and old all in the same day. I enjoyed this piece. Heartspell

  8. petemarshall1 May 19, 2010 at 8:44 pm #

    excellent, short but so intense & to the point, cheers Pete

  9. poetryjunk May 19, 2010 at 10:17 pm #

    Thanks to you all for the comments

    • Jingle May 19, 2010 at 11:50 pm #

      Please visit poets back to return the compliments,
      thank you in advance.

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