The Wanderer

20 May

I bow full of tears
and tell
the loneliness
on street
it was love

But nobody saw
and the crowd
engulfed me
into the oblivion


5 Responses to “The Wanderer”

  1. shanellis May 20, 2010 at 1:57 pm #

    How often love gets swamped in other things.

    Sad but touching.

  2. mairmusic May 20, 2010 at 2:29 pm #

    “tell/ the loneliness/ on the street/ it was love”
    –a beautiful phrase!

  3. trisha May 20, 2010 at 3:10 pm #

    you painted the sadness perfectly.

  4. taramillerwrites May 20, 2010 at 6:04 pm #

    I agree with mairmusic, that line was simply perfection. Great poem!

  5. bryan May 21, 2010 at 6:05 pm #

    Awesomely simple. Hello from Jingle’s Poet Rally.


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